Rough Draft Cyberbullying:Group Eight

Estefania's Post:
Just want to say that your video was really good, and i liked the fact that you interview many people and you got a lot of information of the topic of cyberbullying. I also liked the fact that you guys made your video fun also. I also liked the fact that Bree's mom was also interviewed. I felt like some of the clips were a little cut of but thats ok, you guys can fi those little problems. All in all I think you guys did and excellent job, and i cant wait to see the final result of your video.

Eddy's Post:
I didn't really understand the way that the beginning was suppose to engage the audience because there was no title it was just a person talking. However, when you started with the cyberbullying and the depressing music, i think that was a more better and interesting ending. Another thing that i really liked was the fact that you guys provided a lot of information on a variety of topics that served well to inform the audience. I thought it was really funny but you managed to keep the seriousness of the tone really well when it was you acting as if you were older. Maybe something you guys can work on is better editing on the shots and maybe adding some transitions to smooth them out. This is also true with the music because sometimes it changed really abruptly from one to another. Personally, i really liked the shot of the hall in where you captured someone walking away, i really thought that was professionally shot because it was truly captivating. Some other thing you might want to work on is in the credits and bibliography.
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Elissa's Post:
What I liked best about your video was how funny it was. For example when Bree played the role of a parent it gave off a very comical vibe but everyone got the point. This was effective because it was relatable.The opening scene could have been better by adding a title that introduced your video. The main points I got from the video were that cyberbullying has become popular and affects many in a serious way.I think the clips were really good but they could have been arranged differently.The interviews added a greast vibe to the video and the viewers have a lot that they can take in from the video.The selection of music was great but the editing and incorporation could have been better. I thought the point of the video was clearly brought out in the summation. Aside from missing credits the overall video was well done and entertaining. Kudos to Bree and her group.