Final Draft Cyberbullying: Group Eight

http://youtu.be/rvIP4fj_4hI

I am most proud of the diversity of adults and students. I feel like we portrayed SBHS in a good way.

Comments from others that were helpful to me in creating our final draft were mostly the ones from Dr. Achterman because we only received three comments on our rough draft from students which is sad. I really like the idea of switching things around and creating better titles.

Changes we made on our final draft were fixing the titles, adding sad music to the entire video to change the vibe, labeling everyone who was interviewed, moving the cyberbullying definition to the beginning, fixing the ending credits, adding a bibliography/ works cited, and trying to rearrange things to fit better.

Changes I would you make if I had another day or two, would be more filming, and to rerecord the introduction statement of "I am a cyberbully" by Noah. I also think I would maybe try different lower third titles and trying raising the volume on voices and lowering the volume on music. I would also better cut the clips and maybe do the titles in a different font.

If I had the chance to do the project all over again, i would probably film more, and chosen better computers that do not freeze. I also would have looked for more music to be used, and maybe interviewd more adults.

Creating videos is a lot of work! Now I understand why it takes movies so long to be produced, because everything has to transition properly and be audible, and also be cut correctly. i thought this would be easy, but it is a lot more difficult than i had ever expected. I now appreciate any sort of filming a lot more.

I think that we did decently, I wish I could have used more effects. i am proud we had Cesar in our group, because he taught us how to better utilize titles.